The script has turned out much better, the mother is far less stereotypical and is in fact interesting, and the ending has been greatly improved with my main character far more involved. However I still feel the ending could do with some work, but nothing else seems to fit.
The essay this time was far more difficult as it was a very specifically scipt theory based question not a more general theory question. This led me to, I think, ramble in places as I wasn't sure in what direction I needed to go to fulfill the answer best.
Monday, 5 March 2007
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